Traveling Light by Linda Pastan. W.W. Norton, 2011.
In her new collection, Traveling Light, poet Linda Pastan investigates a life journey as
it nears its end. The poems here are quietly reflective. There is curiosity
about when this journey will be completed, but little fear. The speaker is as
calm as a hidden pool discovered in a forest, and by lingering a moment, the
reader sees the underwater landscape at the bottom, the collected jetsam of the
The natural world is significant to these poems, but it
is not nature as adventure or adversary. Rather, the speaker observes the
flight of birds, the changing of the seasons, and the life cycle of the world right
outside her window:
for Wallace Stevens
One must have a mind of
to regard the cherry tree
and have been warm for days
to behold the boughs of the redbud
prickly with color in the glint
of the April sun; and not to think
of any cruelty in the difficult birthing
of so many leaves, to feel only pure
elation at the sound of the undulant breeze
which is the sound of every garden
with a breeze blowing among its flowers,
the sound the listener hears, watching the buds
which were not quite here a week ago
pushing up from oblivion now.
Like Emily Dickinson, the speaker extrapolates this
framed and bounded view into a larger meaning, but unlike Dickinson's
subterranean avidity, this poem, and many of the others, are accepting in their
observation. They chime like clear, exquisite temple bells: precise, calm,
In poems like "Counting Backward," Pastan's
speaker is contemplative as she questions: "How did I get so old, / I
wonder . . . . It's the physics / of
acceleration I mind, the way time speeds up / as if it hasn't guessed // the
destination—." There is no fear, no
raging, just a quiet curiosity as she considers the end of her own life: "I
see my mother / and father / bearing a cake, / waiting for me / at the starting
line." This is also evident in the lovely poem, "Anatomy," which
contextualizes the speaker's physical aging as part of the natural order of
things while acknowledging the ride isn't always easy:
In the tenement
of the body
generations have left
On the stairwell
of bones and the
walls of flesh
in invisible ink.
Windows look down
on concrete gardens
where live buds
The genes are doing
their scheduled work.
Clutch the banister,
hold on tight.
Pastan's poems are always elegant and well-crafted, never
more so than when she writes in form. In particular, the pantoum "Years
After the Garden" is a graceful exploration of loss and the passage of
time that flows seamlessly and intertwines as tightly as a silken rope. It
Years after the garden closed
a thousand thousand gardens take its place
(hold my hand, I hear the water rising)
Roses, lemons, lilac, hemlock, grape
A thousand thousand gardens take its place.
Is each an Eden waiting to be lost?
Roses, lemons, lilac, hemlock, grape.
What was God thinking when he made the apple?
Adam and Eve and their expulsion from Paradise are the
subject of several poems. The old story is treated with tenderness and elegant
concision as Pastan imagines Eve in conversation with the serpent; missing her
children; and in process of dying.
Traveling Light as
a collection showcases the skill of a poet who knows her craft. It also
presents a topic—aging—that has not often been explored in poetry without sentimentality. Pastan is too disciplined to slip into
pathos. Indeed, her crystalline lyrics,
discerning eye, and tranquil voice invite readers into a poetic vista that they
will be glad to have entered.
Laura Orem is a poet, essayist, and artist living in Red
Lion PA. She holds an MFA from Bennington and teaches writing at Goucher
College. She is a featured writer for The Best American Poetry Blog and is a
senior editor for Toad Hall Press. Her poetry can be found in many journals,
including recently in The Dos Passos
Review and OCHO.