Working Here by David Salner. Rooster Hill Press,
2010.
We read novels, memoirs, and poems to be transported,
to revel in language well
deployed,
to
glimpse the inner life of another or to get another's take on common
experience, so to more fully appreciate our world; however, for many readers, a
writer beguiles most especially when taking us to another country, experience
of which the reader has no experience, and into stories we could not imagine
ourselves.
It seems safe to say that the great majority of those who
read and write poetry in America today can claim de minimis, if any, extended participation in the blue collar
world of overbearing overseers, mechanical time clocks, daily fast food on the
run from one job to another, layoffs and unemployment as the economic cycle
bottoms out, and so on—that world of physical risk amid immense and loud
machinery and the employees' resulting work-scuffed and hardened hands, greasy
nails, worn and balky bodies old before their time. Steve Scafidi and Bob Hicok come to mind as exceptions. Another is David Salner, a current
(three poems in Innisfree 12) and
previous contributor to this journal.
Salner's most recent book of poems, Working Here (winner of the 2010 Rooster Hill Press poetry book
competition), arises from, and draws us into, the 25 years he worked as an iron
ore miner, furnace tender, and laborer after earning his MFA at the University
of Iowa. Just as Brian Turner, in Here,
Bullet, gives us poems out of the Iraq War,
Salner bears witness to an unfamiliar world, rendering it vividly and honestly,
without histrionics, utterly authentically.
It's an uncertain world of punching in and punching out of
work in junkyards, magnesium furnaces, and steel foundries, of pulling the
midnight shift as a welder, of waiting for call-backs while drawing
unemployment when the mine or dock or mill work dries up in Arizona, Utah, West
Virginia, Idaho, or Maryland. In
"Waterfront Memoir," he captures in two quick strokes the physical
and psychic loads carried by the laborer:
I scrape out ancient oil tankers,
breathe the fumes all night until
I'm dizzy.
I can barely climb the steel
ladders
slick with condensate. . . .
"Watch out for the winch
operator,"
a voice crowds in. "He'll drop a load on you
and forget it by lunch."
In "First Check," he is a kid of fifteen
mesmerized by his first paycheck:
I work with Sonny and Mac.
We're dripping with sweat by coffee
break.
Sonny gives me the blow-by-blow
for every fight he's ever started.
Mac shows me a handshake with skin.
It's a world haunted by the specters of easy violence—both
on the job and in relations among fellow workers—and financial contingency, as
in "Minnesota Shutdown":
. . . I snuck out
before he could serve the
foreclosure notice.
I sold my canoe, stuffed my
Plymouth Satellite
with everything else, headed down
Route 35
to West Virginia, to a new power
plant
where I swept fly-ash from concrete
decks
around shiny, magnificent
turbines. They spun so fast
a stillness overcame the motion.
Even the car, the Satellite,
furthers the sense of the marginal and tangential, driving home the speaker's subjection to
economic forces beyond his ken.
David Salner is a storyteller at heart whose poems are redolent with the
power of understatement and close observation, as in "Morning in
Utah":
I grab my safety
equipment
and head for the
building I work in—
a respirator
hanging from my index finger
like a dead
reptile.
When I press it
to my face,
it gives me the
sour kiss
of rubber put
away wet.
These are elemental poems, close to the earth and man's
struggle with it, on it, and in it, and with each other. What I like is the common humanity on
display in Working Here. Salner does not glorify these workers
as somehow saintly in their authenticity.
They fight, scheme, and suffer, as well as display an occasional selflessness,
like the poetry writing/reading rest of us, though the stakes seem higher. Salner's lines have the taste and smell
of truth: "the sour kiss / of rubber put away wet."
Greg McBride is the editor of Innisfree.
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